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But I don't wanna have my hair pulled! XD Does it make tears come to your eyes and does it make you feel like you can't see very well?

really. I've never really had my hair yanked before. What does it feel like?

^ This site is awesome.

*Moved to Writing Tips*

Imp is one... in fact, I believe she teaches it to others. You're going to want to bug her. :)

Chemicals? Accidentally sprayed on his eye?

No, but I don't like vampire stories.

Nate, I don't think "The bike was wobbly" is an active verb; isn't it stative? The sentence is telling, not showing. Perhaps "The bike wobbled as if in distress" would ...

What's wrong with focusing too much on dialogue? Conversations and interactions are what makes a story. Well, I've had someone tell me that I needed to cut back in dialogue ...

Hahaha... I know what you mean. My little sister consistently beats me in writing contests. Heck, she even presented one of her papers at Stanford! Talk about beating my socks ...

An oldie but a goodie. ^_^ Still... best not be repetitious! *Locked*

I'm writing a horror story, and I need a love note as a huge part of it. Unfortunately, I'm clueless about romance and I have no idea what it should ...

Don't worry about it. ^_^

I've been wondering the same thing. Though I think it's different for me as I write in Finnish and then translate it. So the published work would be in Finnish ...

Are you still doing this? If so, what is the genre that you're writing in?