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For critiquing free verse, consider looking at the imagery that the words create. Tell your brother what you think the imagery is saying and then he'll realize if it's on ...

Haha. This is why Umbridge is more evil than Voldemort any day of the week. There's a lot of white space in this.... is there any reason for the white ...

The waterfalls might be a little bit cooler if you actually made it so the camera had a longer exposure to it. Then the water particles wouldn't look as they ...

1. I actually really like this picture. The colors are fun and bright, I love how you're balancing on the ball with your knees bent in and blowing bubbles, and ...

Geep! It's kind of fuzzy and unclear, probably because the sun is right there. *points to large circular blob in the middle* Did you photoshop it or anything, because it ...

Cool beans! However, even though it has two things with Craig Ferguson in them, it needs more Craig Ferguson. Not that you didn't know this already. :P And you are ...

I actually like the red one a bit better because it seems a bit more smooth. The others seem a bit more pixelated. Anyway! The real question is, what is ...

Hahaha... I figure that anything that is only a first chapter is not worth reviving let alone giving away. ^^

Sci fi, I think...

That's not a cannoli...? *confused* That is, "cannoli" is Italian for "little tube" and the pastries used in the display don't really look like little tubes at all. This is ...

LOL, when I write about a perfect character, I write about myself. ;)

We tolerate all written works, as long as it's not plagiarized and stuff. Just make sure you use good grammar and spelling. ;) Otherwise, it will sound very weird when ...

The problem of course is that it quickly becomes unfun after years of struggling with a poem. ;)

It really depends on the situation. If it doesn't sound right, then I won't swear. If it does sound right, I will. It just depends on what the word choice ...

Constantly Risking Absurdity ..... Constantly risking absurdity ............................................ and death ............... whenever he performs ............................................