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Put action in it! For example, I don't like, "The elderly man stood wizened with age, his white hair laid back as he looked up to me." Too many descriptions ...

I had two mild concussions that I fully recovered from. The last one was a couple of months ago, actually! I didn't lose consciousness or anything. But for a couple ...

No posting the same topic in two forums! I'll move the other one to the appropriate spot. This is locked. :)

It sounds adorably cute! I love stories like this! Just remember to do a lot of research... you want the war to come out by being as subtle as you ...

I admit... I like to make my beautiful women complete biatches. It's a bad habit of mine. But it's remarkably fun to write!

Oh my gosh! I love this picture! It's so beautiful and I love the brightness of the eyes of the puppy... something is going in his mind, definitely! And it ...

Give him a realistic death. After all, he's in WW2... he can be easily killed in a great many of ways. Make it short and sweet... the shortness and realism ...

Hey, forgottenfallen! :D The main thing you need to do is actually make it original-looking. Right now, it looks almost exactly like this girl: Too much like her, in fact! ...

Stewart's "Calculus: Early Transcendentals" Halliday, Resnick, and Walker's "Fundamentals of Physics." Like... I consult those two books waaaaay more than I would like to admit. And without those book

For YWS, I actually think it's because young writers today don't read very many short stories today. It's mostly novels for them.

I am totally showing Toast this... mwhahaha. That'll teach HER! :D

I don't read that much anymore (yeah, I suck... I blame school and an engineering major) but what about people that just enjoy being mean for the thrill of it? ...

Hehe, but jealousy does often have a role with bullying. That's why I bullied my little sister when I was younger! ;) Though... it wasn't just because of that. Usually, ...

I thought it was just talking about how a dying atheist was thinking that the end of his life was coming and there would be no hope for the future... ...

Hahaha, thanks! The shiny thing in #5 is just one of those twirly playground slide, by the way. Nothing fancy. I took it at a playground. Oragami isn't mine, sadly. ...