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This is some dialogue. Flesh it out however you want. Just don't change the dialogue. "Mother, I am going to die." "You are going to die?" "I am going to ...

Nice! Would it be okay for me to play with it on Photoshop? *puppy eyes*

Okay... now it's semi-up. At least one website anyway.

The Bible! It's withstood how many millenia and still remains as fresh as it was!

I know, I know, just trying to be somewhat helpful as an art critic. :P

Ooo! Cute! I wanna see this colored! ;)

Everything in color looks vivid and three dimensional. The real thing that is making this look dull is the face and hands look two dimensional. It makes it look very ...

She is going to draw me a picture! Or else...

Pretty! I like the exaggerated features (the nose rocks!) and it looks pretty, uncolored and colored. The hands look a little strange, but what the hey!

Your drawings would become that much better if you cleaned it up. :?

Puppy! *swoons*

Ooooooo! I love it! Then again, I love most abstract art, but still! I love the colors and lack of colors and... it's awesome. :D

I would say "My boyfriend dumped me" so you can get away from all that has/had confusion.

Augh...after putting it off for so long I finished reading it today. 'Twas all right...but I totally went into Critique Mode after I spotted four typos in the first two ...

You're a dork! Okay... that is pretty cool, and explains why you draw them the way you do. :)