Snoink

*shrugs* If roles are going to be reversed and you want to turn the conventional upside down and on its head, you better lull the reader in. "His Dark Materials" ...

Psh, but you don't have blue eyes! I do! Do not post here unless you have a stuffed elephant in your room.

Frakenstein

First of all, spell check it. There's lots of random errors. Most of them are readable, but I'm still not sure what "pubbing" means. Either that, or my American mind ...

Plot-wise, this sucked. You had no premise other than "treason," which without a timeframe is utterly pointless. :D You miss the point. Whom does he report for treason? But this ...

The Star Spangled Banner “Sing it,” he said, staring at the young lady intently. His lips twitched once, half in a smile, and half in disgust, and he said again, ...

I saw this on TYWC, and I still like it, especially the ending. It works because as it goes on, it sounds soppier and soppier until finally - BAM! - ...

OooOh. I actually liked this! Sometimes the rhythms seemed a little forced, but I liked the imagery and the story very much. Good job!

pail

Hehehe... I don't know Black Rose so well but the word reminds me of... [b]Goth[/]

this is only the begging I've a lot to work on this but enjoy. CL Slaying the Dreamer I'm a priest for the poorest sacrifice I'm but a raft in ...

No I wouldn't. For one, this seems too one-sided. Automatically when reading this, the evil side is looked upon as the good side. Some writers might see this as a ...

Oooh... favorites more like. Night of the Hunter Singin' in the Rain The Fifth Element Casablanca On the Waterfront On the Town Lion King Who Framed Roger Rabbit? The Treasure ...

That's not true! I've seen many articles that short in the Wall Street Journal. Not enough to comment on, but I haven't a clue where you're going with this. Consider ...

...Where are you getting your information from, Gal?