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Plot-wise, this sucked. You had no premise other than "treason," which without a timeframe is utterly pointless. :D You miss the point. Whom does he report for treason? But this ...

The Star Spangled Banner “Sing it,” he said, staring at the young lady intently. His lips twitched once, half in a smile, and half in disgust, and he said again, ...

I saw this on TYWC, and I still like it, especially the ending. It works because as it goes on, it sounds soppier and soppier until finally - BAM! - ...

OooOh. I actually liked this! Sometimes the rhythms seemed a little forced, but I liked the imagery and the story very much. Good job!

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Hehehe... I don't know Black Rose so well but the word reminds me of... [b]Goth[/]

this is only the begging I've a lot to work on this but enjoy. CL Slaying the Dreamer I'm a priest for the poorest sacrifice I'm but a raft in ...

No I wouldn't. For one, this seems too one-sided. Automatically when reading this, the evil side is looked upon as the good side. Some writers might see this as a ...

Oooh... favorites more like. Night of the Hunter Singin' in the Rain The Fifth Element Casablanca On the Waterfront On the Town Lion King Who Framed Roger Rabbit? The Treasure ...

That's not true! I've seen many articles that short in the Wall Street Journal. Not enough to comment on, but I haven't a clue where you're going with this. Consider ...

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Bluebird Remember when we were together And we watched the bluebird fly, Its swift wings and radiant body Melt into the autumn sky. You spotted the lovely bluebird first. You ...

I remember I read a cartoon once that one society was going to give another, less modern society a chance of what gift they wanted to have bestowed onto them. ...

My mom once went to a Shakespeare play in Ashland, and there she heard two women talking. "Oh, I really don't know why everyone likes his work," one woman said. ...