Snoink

You use too much pretentious words. I know it is tempting to look through the dictionary and use every word that you see which is longer than 14 syllables, but ...

Ugh... I like the color black. Black, black black. It's much easier on the eyes. Anyways, the poem is interesting, but it feels too short, as if the idea hasn't ...

I like it too. However, there is this one word that annoyed me, "extracted." Is it necessary? Can you think of a better word? Also, the last couple of lines ...

*high fives* I hate lengthy stuff too... lengthy words and pretentious rhyming that is oh so sophisticated. GAG ME. Anyway, it has somewhat ignited my creative fires. Good... I think.

It's "Insiders/Outsiders." We discussed it in our English class the other day. Insiders are the ones who can joke about their own race/religion/etc. within their own group. Por ejemplo, the ...

No, I don't intend to being sacreligious. I intend to joke around. I love to have fun and play with words and traditional ideas. This is not me being unholy, ...

Blue Gray

Nicole is not such a horrible name. Olga is far worse.

That's what I used to think of the Big Bang until I researched it. :P

happy short fat men wearing green

school band (as long as it's good!) griffins (eagle forefront, lion hind) or sniffirg (lion forefront, eagle tail and wings)?

bcain is one of those rare authors who takes criticism seriously and does her best to improve her writing -- with excellent results. :D

Yay! Updated stuff. Three new picture of unicorns, one with a phoenix, and another with a dragon, all made refreshingly badly. *bows*

"Hey babe. I'm a necromancer. Wanna make out?"

Why can't ye... Ask Google!