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:D I'll slaught-- critique this and you can slaughter my story! The freaky one, that is... Where should I start? I'm not a big fan of fragments, and I especially ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe because he was imaging naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...

I'm afraid to. :S

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe because he was imaging naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...

Tell-y tell-y tell-ephone! See the tell-evision on. Tune the tell-emarketer And make 'im tell all. Tell-y tell-y tell-y tell-y telly all all!

There you are wrong. The middle east war is called a conflict. Is it? No, not really. Read my essay called "On War." I posted it in the nonfiction section. ...

On War Words are alive. Their meanings freely change, depending on what the person wants to say and how he wants to say it. This is how our language evolves; ...

Psh. Native Americans had wars. The turning factor for them to fight more was the arrival of horses. They could go anywhere after they had horses! Most religions have a ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe because he was imaging naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...

...and then retire. XD

LOL! I've never heard a Christian say that. But I consider tha rather... er... lazy. You gotta get involved with life!

I squinted... it looks great!

I liked it. When I read the first line, my mind immediately pictured one of those classic stories that starts with, "Once upon a time..." This isn't a bad thing. ...

It's interesting, but you don't describe your story enough. No, I don't mean using pretentious words *shudders* but I read this poem and I wonder, "Huh?" Now, of course, this ...

I liked the poem. Very random, yes, but it wasn't senseless. Also, it used some pleasantly non-pretentious words. O_o *pats on back* Good job.