Snoink

A gasp. A lurch. Another nightmare. He wakes, rolls toward her and puts his hand on her shoulder. She starts, shrinks from his touch. “Don’t.” Her voice is thick. Did ...

The third verse didn't make sense to me. Otherwise, it was an interesting poem and I enjoyed it.

Well... the rhyming seemed very forced. And the metering didn't seem to make sense either. Also, "heavens" would actually be "heaven's" as it is possesive in that case. the thing ...

^ Her freestyle poem was critiqued by me.

When you were partying all night long in my empty house, I was shaking in fear because I had to sleep with my gay friends in a same bunker. When ...

Dialogue Grammar Memorize the following rules: “That sucks,” he said. “That sucks!” he said. “Does that suck?” he said. “That sucks,” he said, slapping his knee. “That sucks!” he s

...don't eat cheese while snorkeling. I beg you!

Um... I realized I never did a welcome post. I'm not even sure I was welcomed. So... yeah. I'm new on this site, but I came from TYWC when Shadow ...

Why does it always seem to be that way? You come up and I start to sway. I look in your eyes, my own mingled in hate. But I can't ...

1. The Corolla 2. My cousin 3. Penelope

Let him talk. We have the First Amendment, no? Freedom of speech belongs to all. It's probably doing the opposite effect anyway. Even some of the people who are liberals ...

LOL, if you feel extremely offended, you can always look at my drawings! See? and I suck too. I'm just telling you what I think about your picture. Yep... and ...

Lincoln was as controversial as our president today. Some hated him, some loved him. In whatever case, he was very confused about the whole issue, but took a stance anyway. ...

This was written during the time of Bluebird, I was getting frustrated with all the comments about the original poem. The first comment? "This seems too forced." Okay, then, how ...

:P Reading those kind of books always gets rid of my writer's block problems. Lord knows, I'm good at grammar and the like. But reading something about writing can be ...