Snoink

Guys... stop drooling on my foot. It's annoying.

SCARF!

Fun stuff! I like the one about writer's block.

*sings the song I supposedly know*

“Well at least it’s not that bad of a place,” I said glancing at the huge grand piano in the middle of the room. I looked over to my parents ...

That would be seriously awesome.

How do you punctuate something where there is an interjection then they continue to speak. "That totally"- he scratched his cheek "that totally sucks" like how to you punctuate that? ...

It sounds like an awesome RPG story. :D Er... *ahem* I would read it.

And I know all of them! ...or not.

I have webpages! I'm not good at it, mind you, but I have webpages! There in my sig.

Fun! However... one thing. It's embarrassing.

A gasp. A lurch. Another nightmare. He wakes, rolls toward her and puts his hand on her shoulder. She starts, shrinks from his touch. “Don’t.” Her voice is thick. Did ...

The third verse didn't make sense to me. Otherwise, it was an interesting poem and I enjoyed it.

Well... the rhyming seemed very forced. And the metering didn't seem to make sense either. Also, "heavens" would actually be "heaven's" as it is possesive in that case. the thing ...

^ Her freestyle poem was critiqued by me.