Snoink

I have an uncle who cannot live without oxygen tubes going to his lungs. :S

Ew.... the hanger?

Yes, but a newborn baby cannot make decisions either. Should we kill them too?

I was talking about what you said, Bobo! Honest! That, and promoting an otherwise useless story! XD And who decides who's who? Freaks and normal people sounds like point of ...

^ Has the same kind of haircut I have. We look eerily alike.

Lol! Okay, we don't want to know any spoilers anyway. :P But, if your plan is making her involved with a government of mythical creatures, then I advised you to ...

Aww... no Geoffrey? :(

It's cute. ^_^ I like his little knees.

edit: WHY ARE YOU SWITCHING CHARACTERS?????????????? Also, how many glasses of alcohol has she had? She would be barely able to move, for heaven's sake! Girls get much more intoxicated ...

....how are they going to throw off the government? It sounds like "Teenz that are Crazy!!" XD

Actually... this is interesting. Brad, seeing as you are an athiest, what is your interpretation of atheism?

That's it... I'm going to write a story similar to yours. We can compare! XD EDIT: Starting... bwhahaha!

Well... First, I am not fond of this sentence, "He or she must write to enter into the reality of things: they must not let themselves be consumed in artificial ...

You need to state that clearly in the first paragraph and then continue the thought. You branched out with essayists, which is nice, but it distracts us from what you ...

Drab or not, it still needs a solid thesis. What is your intent with this essay?