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I read it. What happened to Lanie made me cringe... That's a good thing. Nitpicks: Check the commas and see if they're necessary. I noticed a couple that seemed out ...

^ I keep thinking I've met him on TYWC. :?

^ Lives eerily close to me.

^ Is the lord of editing, yet hasn't waded through any of my stories. :P

Ugh... you had bring up those reeds? More! More!

Trying to do the serious stuff and drifting back into cartoons again, eh?

I hope I come back as a maggot. That way I get to live off of my decomposing body. :D I'm such a dependent...

I disagree with the said part. If you use said too many times, it is like stabbing your eyes with hot pokers. "Hi," I said. "Hi," she said. "What's new?" ...

Either way, she's a girl now. You guys can continue drooling, as long as it's not on my foot.

iTunes. ;)

^ Name reminds me of pork rinds in the wind.

^ Is called Nai (I think?) because... well, I dunno. It confuses me too.

I miss when this thread wasn't a flaming thread...

@ Ryan and Rincewind: I think creating a mythology/world is the writer's personal preference. So either way would be correct, depending how you work.

i was just about to ask whether you need one. i've started writing a new story, which i actually plan to post once i have a bit more written and ...