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I don't think so. Maybe your computer's being stupid? Maybe it was so scared of my lovely eyes that it blocked my pics!

^ Went crazy on Paint.

I thought it was some modern artist going crazy! LOL!

Hehe! :D She's probably another 40 year old man. :P

It's very simple. You can't read in too deeply, but well... whatever. It's simple. OMG, WHAT IF MATT IS SIMPLE? How does she make it her? :shock:

You're welcome! But now you're making me want to fix my websites, and... *sniffs* They're down! :( They'll be back soon... honest.

Writes very random stuff... and comments on my stuff fairly regularly. WOW!

Is it just me, or are dreams the hardest things to critique? LOL! this dreary, wet dungeon, that seems never ending. Too many dots! And you have all these adjectives ...

Very nice... lots of good points. ^_^

I know why it seemed contemporary! *waves hand in the air* Because you described the click of the gun! See? That implies modern rifles, not muskets. Or blunderbusses. But really... ...

:( *sniffles* I like critiquing things! You took it away from me! NOW YOU MUST DIE, FREDERICK THE EVIL BUTTER STICK!

Well... first of all, the grammar was... Wait, you didn't actually expect a real critique? XD

And then, the ultimate question comes... Have you made an outline for this story yet? Some writers absolutely go crazy when this question appears. "How dare you ask that of ...

Ah! Finally! It looks like your computer swallowed up the words again, most likely because it's on overtype mode. Overtype is your enemy; turn it off. For example, just because ...

>.< Incan, don't go. Sometimes, you can frustrate me, but I've never met anyone that doesn't frustrate me on some level or another. Most of the time, it's a blast. ...