Snoink

My dad works directly with the dept. of homeland security. We know what violence is, lol. yeah, you know what violence is, but im going to be dollars to doughnuts ...

GRAMMAR I know what you're thinking now. "I have this story that needs help, and the first thing that Snoink is paying attention to is the grammar before she even ...

Or earthquakes. :? My mom walked in my room today and said that Hurricane Karina hit it. XP I expect a round of bad jokes...

Yes, you're right Sarah. The reason why I decided to continue writing was because the toughest critiquer I know actually said one of my stories was good. :shock: Could you ...

I... knew that.

Thanks Snoink for your critiques of my work. Though, I was hoping you'd be a lot harder on "Remember Lanie" than you were. In fact, if you could go back ...

No, don't worry, you make sense. ^_^ But this story has never been written out before (thus, the reason why you've never read it Beet). I've always told it orally ...

I think I saw this on Flax! But I noticed a couple of things now... Okay, in the first paragraph you have "adjective, adjective" and then continue with the story. ...

^ Knows the word "snockered" whatever that means...

Oooo... that sounds intensely helpful. After all, there's so much that goes on with the other characters as well as the main ones that it's necessary to keep that in ...

^ Has an avvie.

Pretty! I like the exaggerated features (the nose rocks!) and it looks pretty, uncolored and colored. The hands look a little strange, but what the hey!

Your drawings would become that much better if you cleaned it up. :?

I'M BACK! *giggles madly* First of all, before I begin, I have a confession to make. I am a perfectionist in all the wrong places. I remember writing dozens and ...

Okay... three done (well, I still need to do more for Kay Kay, but started!) Anybody else? I finished my calculus and chemistry hw, so right now I am not ...