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Well... it's not much to comment on, but there were several spelling errors. My finger was really hurting the other day, so I can understand completely if you typed too ...

Ooo! Cute! I wanna see this colored! ;)

Everything in color looks vivid and three dimensional. The real thing that is making this look dull is the face and hands look two dimensional. It makes it look very ...

2/10 Too many kisses.

:shock: You stole my idea from FREAK! No, I think it's an awesome revelation. Too often people use "cutesy" stuff when the origins are hardly cutesy. Otherwise, I wouldn't have ...

She is going to draw me a picture! Or else...

The first part is awesome! But then the last couple of lines seem to lose the attractiveness of the former lines. Although you are losing momentum... Hmmm... :?

*shrugs* I might be reading a different translation.

*shrugs* I know, it's strange. But Incan's right... Lucifer really wasn't in the bible.

LOL! Well, you're in California, so I might just stalk you and see how that wedding is coming... Nah, j/k. Good luck!

Pretty good! I like it. Even so, I'm going to point out all the tyops. I thought I was useless, that I didn't eserve any better. Well, now I know ...

How about nonfiction stories?

Er... Lucifer is in but one passage of the bible, and in that passage he is not known as the devil. Just someone who was thrown down from hell.

100/10 THE BEATLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ABBEY ROAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *kisses a million times*

When I marry, it will be to the guy who can give me the nicest carrot cake. So... I wanna dress like a bunny and hop my way to the ...