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:shock: You stole my idea from FREAK! No, I think it's an awesome revelation. Too often people use "cutesy" stuff when the origins are hardly cutesy. Otherwise, I wouldn't have ...

She is going to draw me a picture! Or else...

The first part is awesome! But then the last couple of lines seem to lose the attractiveness of the former lines. Although you are losing momentum... Hmmm... :?

*shrugs* I might be reading a different translation.

*shrugs* I know, it's strange. But Incan's right... Lucifer really wasn't in the bible.

LOL! Well, you're in California, so I might just stalk you and see how that wedding is coming... Nah, j/k. Good luck!

Pretty good! I like it. Even so, I'm going to point out all the tyops. I thought I was useless, that I didn't eserve any better. Well, now I know ...

How about nonfiction stories?

Er... Lucifer is in but one passage of the bible, and in that passage he is not known as the devil. Just someone who was thrown down from hell.

100/10 THE BEATLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ABBEY ROAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *kisses a million times*

When I marry, it will be to the guy who can give me the nicest carrot cake. So... I wanna dress like a bunny and hop my way to the ...

Like this? "After his wife had returned from the hospital, he had found her in the emptied nursery, with a paint roller in her hand, covering the memories of a ...

Oops! Now I'm really confused. :lol: Don't worry, that happens often... Don't worry. Ask any writer here who likes well-developed characters, and you'll find that they have done the same ...

Very poignant. ;)

Nice! :) Simple, poetic... just the way I like it! However, these lines: My body sweats From the warm glow Of your love for me Of your eyes Brown eyes ...