Snoink

The bad part of this poem is that it's displayed on the main page, whether you like this kind of language or not. :?

9/10 because it's zany in a cool way.

That's the other thing. If we legalize them, only medicinal reasons mind you, it's more plausible that we have some control over the drugs and where they're going, since hopefully, ...

OMG! AHH She told me it'd be her! She told me! But then she said she was bluffing! I thought she was bluffing! *dies* Yay, Snoink!... *dies* I was bluffing... ...

Oh no! Fallacies galore, and bad grammar. Let's not go there, guys. This was why I asked the question: Once while I was visiting a friend, a drug dealer came ...

LOL! 8/10 since it reminds me of the Rocky Horror Picture Show.

5/10 because he looks ugly...

^ Has a ridiculously cute evil kitty in her sig.

Absolutely right, Incan. Now, one of the worst traps a writer can fall into is being too emotional while writing something. Even poetry, which is very emotional by itself, shouldn't ...

Okay, I can't stand it anymore. "I laugh in the face of danger, and then hide an wait for it to go away." - Xander, from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer." ...

Oops, I forgot to comment on this. I too love the second stanza. What doesn't seem to fit is the first two lines. Probably because the second person is used ...

5/10 It's interesting, but you spelled children wrong. =/

please God don't abandon me! not when i need you most. i'm hurting badly and i want to cry but i can't not now por favor Díos mi alma está ...

This is NOT a good prologue. It sets it up, mind you, but so clumsily that it leaves the reader uninterested. You can explain all this information in the story. ...

We'd lose a lot of our best critiquers, though, if we split the site in half. That's what I'm worried about. Not necessarily. I'm 17 now, but I like critiquing ...