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Wowzers. I must admit to getting the creepy-crawly's as i read this. You've got quite the chunk of talent kid. Stay sharp!

Hmmm. Bridle your passions within your writing and you will achieve much better flow.

I love how you write. There is a lot of passion in this poem.

This is so sweet and romantic..you sure have a talent with poetry kid. I'd love to read more!

You're work gave me warm fuzzy's!

I really like this poem..share the talent kid!

Very cool. I haven't run into one like this before. I like it!

Absatootly incredible!

THis is freaking awesome

But in fact I only need your strength and support to make it rule This is my favorite line. I love how you tie in that teens could be so ...

Fabulous work! I love your detailed word choice.

If I were a bumblebee I don’t know what I’d do. I guess I’d fly around all day and buzz the whole day through. But if I were a bumblebee ...

Deep. I love it!