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I love the form of this poem. It required me to pause and reminisce times when I have experienced this same thing. It has inspired me to get more creative ...

This is interesting. I imagine a prisoner sitting in a jail waiting for someone to bust him out. Till then, he imagines that all the bad things about jail are ...

This poem is soooo good! I love the picture it paints and i especially like the ending of you leaving. Very powerful. Share the talent hun :)

I love the line that says- i'd swoop and i'd dive simply being alive. That stuck out to me. You sure do show some talent in this piece. I love ...

Thanks Nixie and Butterfinger! Your tips made a lot of sense to me and i'll use those to make changes for the better.

Talking to felt so right. Topic after topic into the night. Going on drives, watching a flick, I could tell you and I totally click. At Christmas you gave me ...

Great work sis! You always succeed in blowing me away :)

Hey hey! I love this poem! My middle name is Jo :) connection! aww how sweeeet...anyways this made me giggle and i hope to read more of your super cool ...

Oh my gosh! This is soooo awesome! I read to my brother and he and i laughed together. You sure are talented so keep up the fantastic work kid.

I really liked this poem until you used the f word. That was completely uncalled for. In my opinion using that word ruined your piece. I hate to sound harsh, ...

I don't think saying F the world is appropriate EVER. That's extremely rude. There are many other ways to express how you feel without using derogatory language. Those who are ...

Wow. This made me want to reach out to you and help you find what you're looking for. Well done!

Bravo! This poem gave me goose bumps. I absolutely loved it and can't wait to read more of your work!

Absatootly fabulous! You are bursting with talent girly!

Yikes. This is loaded with awesomeness! Breakups are rough and you captured the emotions we all feel perfectly in writing.