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Erm...that was an interesting take on Sesame Street. I'm not sure what to think, to be honest. It certainly was creative, but, on the other hand...

I really like the style. I hope you write more of this-I'm intrigued.

Oh, as for the sidekick's name, I had to make a name that was nearly pronounceable and only had one vowel. It was for a contest in one of my ...

Uh.... I'm not sure if this is for real or not, so I don't know whether you want criticism or just attention.

I'm not a fan of the downer ending in general, but if you like it, I'd say keep it. Although I do think that you should stretch it out a ...

This was awesome =D

I like how the Android has a sassy personality. She's not what you'd expect. So, do the citizens know that Androids exist, or have they been kept under wraps? I'm ...

Oh wow, this is great =D I'm a sucker for semi-totalitarianistic futuristic stories, and this one's off to a great start. I'll be reading more.

Honestly? I noticed a lot of resemblance to Harry Potter. And not in a good way.

Sad, but pretty. I liked it. The rhyme scheme was odd, but I'm not sure if that was a stylistic choice or not.

Ooh, Muse is cheeky! I liked that though, I really got the vision of this feisty girl threatening even while being kidnapped.

I like what you've got here so far, but there were some pacing issues. Slow it down a bit, and take time to introduce the characters a bit more. I ...