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Kafka ;] I believe I've owed you this review for eight days now. I'll try and make it worth your while -- despite the few words I have to offer ...

Mikko/Marco/Twin brother/sister :mrgreen: I caught this in my feed and figured I'd swing by to lend a quick review. Though I'm not sure how much more constructive I can get, ...

Hey there, AngelKnight. :D I suppose I only have a few major things I wanted to point out that didn't sit as well with me on this piece. For one, ...

Hi, Tanya. :mrgreen: First I just want to say welcome to YWS! I see you're a new member. I'm Smylin', and I'll see if I can't help you out a ...

Hello, SkullCandi! :mrgreen: A fairly brief beginning, I see. Not that short is ever bad. It almost makes me a bit disappointed only because of the scene you were describing. ...

Jas! H'lo there. Allow me to just jump right on in here. Some things I did like: I know you live in the city and the whole east coast is ...

JP :mrgreen: Yeah, I'm just as surprised as you are. I've acually made it to review in a timely manner. And with obvious reason, this was too intriguing to not ...

Hey, Bint! Here as requested. Granted that was weeks ago, but my apologies for not being more punctual. If only you could believe how busy I've been. :[ Anyhow though, ...

Mikko. :mrgreen: Sup, girl. I'm gonna probably keep this pretty short. But I felt I just had to comment on one of your works seeing as you've been belting out ...

Hey there, Ren. :mrgreen: Here to lend a review! Now, as for a few smaller notes I wanted to make before I get into the thick of your actual poem: ...

Mike :mrgreen: T'is I, Smylin'. Forgive my lack of punctuality. I hope the review in some way makes up for my tardiness. If not, feel free to request another review. ...

Hi there. :) I know I'm a bit late, but I hope the quality of my review somehow makes up for my tardiness. I apologize in advance if anything I ...

I'm finally here. :mrgreen: Always a pleasure to read good honest work like this, JP. Not to pat you on the back too much, as I have an honest tendency ...

H'okay... My Spanish only goes so far(really, it's quite sad), but this translated so beautifully I had to stop by to lend a quick word. With whatever I can manage ...

Lumi. :smt044 Well, I now have right to say you're absolutely nuts for not delving into fiction more often. Shame on you for holding out on the world. I do ...