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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Taylor's Treasures

    I feel almost speechless... This was absolutely pure, romantic art. :) Although, I kind of do find myself agreeing with the reviewer above me. It was a little gory, but ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Castiel- Misha Collins

    I'm a fiend for Supernatural, and I love Misha Collins as Castiel :) But I'm afraid this does not seem to look a thing like him. The textures aren't quite ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Valentine's Innocence (For Teardrop's Contest)

    I loved this! This was my kind of love poetry . It was sweet and charming, and although you made the comments insinuating sex, I feel it only made it ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: No longer a part of the novel

    I absolutely love the way you end your chapters. It always seems empowering just to read. Great closers make for great final impressions. I love the impression you have given ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: 0. Prologue (Redrafted)

    This was a very well written first draft of chapter 1. Hardly any flaws to your writing. It was clear and interesting, and I especially love how you seem to ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Alden's Journal - Entry 1

    September Twelvth, 1869 It's not particularly routine of me to keep a journal of my days thoughts. I have never really seen the point in it all. Personally, I've always ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Coyote Turn-around

    This is something we all worked on in my animation class awhile back. It was extremely fun to do. I think Coyote was actually one of the easiest to draw. ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: 1. Tiptoeing over the edge. (Redrafted)

    This was a very great opening chapter/prologue. I can honestly say there were few flaws in the flow of your writing and above all, it was very interesting to read ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Suite Chapter Four

    Of course, I agree with summerlove. Your stories are very interesting. Although, this chapter could have really been longer! :) But I do like how it ended. Ronnie running into ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Other Re: Trying to Define Art

    This was a crazy, beautiful, eratic, funny piece of writing. Made me smile :) That is all that matters! I give it two thumbs up. Fantastic job. Write more stuff ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Suite Chapter Three

    I think chapter 3 is my favorite so far. There's a lot more of that charming Marky in here. :) I find it funny how well you can switch from ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Suite Chapter Two

    This chapter was just as enthralling as the last. :) My only critique again would have to be the grammar and punctuation. And every now and then there's a minor ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Little Birdie

    This was very cute and simple :) I liked it a lot, although I feel there is not much to go off of for a complete review. I merely have ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Ballerina

    I think this poem was a beautiful idea, but there were some flaws in your writing. Things that simply disrupted the flow of it. But I feel they were easily ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: [delete]

    This was unique. It had its own sort of special quality. It wasn't confusing to read or understand. I felt I was with you the entire time. It was a ...

    Feb 25, 2011


I'm tired of books having villains who are just villains for no reason.
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