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Great poem here :) You did a great job with portraying your feelings. You poem was short and yet to the point. I really liked this part here: The edges ...

Okay, this is a truly sweet picture. :) I like how you put the classics in with the Holy Bible. All remarkable works! I love The Catcher in the Rye. ...

Don't worry CS. I got your back on the editing :) It's a tough one isn't it! I wouldn't worry about that though. This story is like the most perfect ...

Wow. A lot of reviews on this one, huh? I can see why. Your poem was epic. xP I like how you turned a crappy run in with the internet ...

This was a really sweet story you wrote. :) I feel like it shared a deeper meaning behind the whole coat thing. I like the part where you write, "I ...

Hello Jas :) Here to do that review you asked for. By the way, thanks for that. I'm truly flattered. You can beg for a review any day from me! ...

Hello CS :) Back to do a full review on this for you. Hopefully my editing helps and you like my suggestions. Of course I do not want to change ...

Wow, you're making it very hard to have just one favorite chapter. Now I have three more favorite chapters. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I loved how you ...

Hey, wonderful poem. :) I liked it a lot. It reminded me of something right out of my English book. I really love how you incorporated your heritage into it. ...

Hello :) Great poem you got here. I liked the message. I can see why you chose your username! I thought what you wrote was pretty cool. Although I'm not ...

A little girl gazes up into her father's eyes for the first time. She is loved. Her father sees his world in his hands. This small piece of life which ...

Hey, me again :) This was a pretty good chapter two. Although, there were still many flaws when it came to grammar and punctuation and the whole past tense present ...

Overall, I like what you did here with this story. :) It was interesting and fun to read. I have a few suggestions and critiques though. For one, I noticed ...

Wow.. I really, really do like this one a lot. But you've heard this all before in the other posts I'm sure! I read them. You're readers are very moved ...

Hey :) I agree with Jojo. If you edited the way she suggested I think you would have a way better poem. You're poem is great, it just needs a ...