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Hello KT :) Here to lend a quick review. Or maybe not so quick?.. Here we go! ... H ave you ever just stared at the phone, hoping that it ...

Beautiful.. This was just as incredible as the last story of yours that I read. Only, it was just so different, all I could keep thinking about was, "Whoa, this ...

Fantastic work here, CS. This was a very great addition to your story, the whole past thing. I think you really took it to the next level with your characters. ...

Thanks all, for the positive reviews and the help in critiqueing. I made some minor editing, but this poem I feel is still very unfinished. I thank Snoink for the ...

Welcome Spartacus :P Need I say more? Have fun here at YWS! -Smy

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I'm speechless on how utterly cool this was to read. I don't think I know of anyone else who could create such a unique style poem. The imagery you portray ...

Bravo! Very well put Skins. I honestly agree with you.. The British accent is very stereotyped some times, but I too get that no accent is the same. Just like ...

Wow.. I loved this. - Really loved this. It was so cleanly written, and your characters -so realistic. It was like reading something right off the shelf at a bookstore. ...

This is really great :) I loved your lyrics, but I was also curious to hear you sing them, so I looked you up on youtube. It was really sweet. ...

Nice to meet you Julie :) Welcome to YWS. I think you're gonna love it here. -I do! Making friends will be cake. Everyone is pretty great. If you have ...

Very nice, Kafka ;) This poem is truly well written. I have no critique to give. You are simply a great writer. I loved how you constructed this poem. It ...

Hello CS :) Here to edit some more. I'll just be putting in red the alterations I have made mainly. Easy peasy. Here we go. CHAPTER SIX CHAPERONE Sandy's suite ...

This was a really cool poem. I liked this a lot actually. :) I disagree with Blueras though. I understood your ending perfectly. I, a coward, Ran from you. Because ...

Overall, I think this was really sweet. But there are flaws with the set up in punctuation. Your glowing brown hair, A nd your ageless brown eyes. (I think you ...