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My friend, you have talent ;) This was thoroughly entertaining. You should be proud of your awesome writing abilities. I LOVED this. Great work.

This was so clever and funny. I loved it. My favorite parts on Death's list were 5, 4, and 1. :P Made me laugh. I love when writers hold that ...

I feel like I'm missing out. I couldn't download the attatchment. Safari wouldn't let me :(... Oh well. I'm sure it was great Kafka. :) I can assume by your ...

You seem to be quite popular on the featured works section. :D I can see why. This was great. I especially loved how you ended it. That's always a good ...

Hi Gracie :) Nice poem. Overall, I love the idea behind it. I sort of agree with Kafka though. Something wasn't right with the rhyme scheme. I didn't really notice ...

I can tell where you made some tweaks. This was good! I noticed little minor grammar errors, but who doesn't make those? I think you added more thought into this ...

This was kind of cool to read. I liked it. It seemed very brief though, so I'm sorry if my review doesn't really help any. Just wanted to say great ...

These stories tend to be the hardest to put out there I notice. They also tend to be the toughest to word right. :\ I think Sargsauce already put a ...

I wasn't really quite sure what to make of this really. It seemed a little odd. Because Joe and Nick are brothers. And why would they be bisexual? I couldn't ...

Aww! It's over ;( You must make a second book off this. I swear, you'll be my favorite junior writer of all time. I can't believe you made Ismael's wedding ...

This isn't my recommended reading, but it is still written with heart. And so I post it with both reluctancy and a hope that someone can appreciate it for whatever ...

Wonderful job with this, really. It was so simple and sweet. So simple that it made a whole lot of sense, but still wasn't in the least bit boring. I ...

Awesome addition! Both of the Federal brothers having a baby. I love it! I love how you left this on a clinger, too. I'm sad that it's all going to ...

Your title drew me in. Excuse me for being drawn to the sappy love poems ;) I thought this was pretty sweetly written. Although, I can't help but feel that ...

Back to edit. Here we go :) CHAPTER EIGHTEEN THE SECRET PART I Ismael was sitting down(,) drinking his coffee when Marky came to his suite. He sat on the ...