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SmylinG

  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, I'm new here and I'm a nervous wreck

    Welcome Priyansha. :D I wouldn't be too apprehensive about submitting your work. This is a community to help you grow as a writer. Everyone here is pretty awesome about giving ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Grace Kelly [pencil]

    The face is wonderful. You really nailed the eyes. I love it. Your shading was beautifully done for the most part. My only critique, the wrap that she's wearing looks ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Just a few :3

    Hey Durrie. Cool drawings you have here. But I have to agree with Jennya. I don't particularly like your using of lined paper. I think a nice clear surface would ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Other Re: Nothingness

    This is a memory you say? Interesting. Very interesting. I wonder what it's about, really. Your way of expressing this was very poetic. I think it's what I enjoyed most ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Extraordinary Scar- Obnoxious Kitchen Knife

    I have a question. Is this suppose to be part of a bigger story? I think this here was an interesting read. Although, it felt as though some ends were ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Long Jump

    Hello Hayden, here to review this for you. I have to admit, I was anticipating some deeper meaning when I first read through this poem the first time. But then ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Confinement- 19th Century London

    Personally, I found this very interesting to read. It had that little something in it that keeps my attention flowing throughout the entire thing up until the very end. Your ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: I hated school

    This was pretty interesting. Overall, I think your plot is cool. Sort of morbid and creepy. Good job with the weird! ;) However, I found that some of your sentences ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Random Doodles (Updated 28/04/11)

    You're getting into anime. Nice. I did some anime in my animation class. It's the most realistic type of cartooning out there. There are so many tricks to drawing good ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What to write about?

    This... was ingenious. Foolproof intelligent. I loved it. You had a very clever way with words throughout the entire thing. It was so complete. The only part I have to ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If You Only Knew My Name

    I was feeling pretty damn confident about commenting on this one. Had all these great things to say. Then I scrolled all the way down the page and saw the ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Colors

    This was really artistically colorful, aside from being obviously a poem about color. I liked reading it. (: It was enjoyable. You seem to be well partnered up. What you ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Doodles #1

    Is that Shakespeare paper? I just noticed it, sorry. This is pretty sweet d: Rico is cool. The only thing I can say is you probably could have filled him ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Joy [Prologue]

    Hello BugBug. Here to lend an honest review for you today (: First off, I would say even for a prologue this could be a lot longer. There wasn't that ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Flower painting

    This is a really beautiful painting you have here. It's so realistic. All the small lines in the petals, it adds a special touch. And your color choice is perfect. ...

    Mar 16, 2011


Most people ignore most poetry because most poetry ignores most people.
— Adrian Mitchell