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Constricting white blanket. No-- jacket. Yes. Straps. Breathe? "I can't breathe." I think of before times when I wasn't so confined to myself. Think of the taste of his words, ...

First of all, I want to share to you my story when I was not yet born. (This first sentence doesn't sound so smooth. Maybe re-written as, "First off, I ...

I have to second Sarg's reply. There was almost nothing to this. I see the aim for simplicity, but this was a little too simple. Causing it to carry on ...

I will not say a bird has ever pooped on my head, nor will I say that it didn't bring me any luck whatsoever. -_- Also, never go to the ...

The first one is by far my favorite. I would buy that off you. Seriously. :D Your style is flawless and so unique. I haven't run into artwork I was ...

Kafka, Kafka. . . Are you sure you're thirteen? :P I'm stunned at the poetry you make. It's so effortless, each time. ^-^ Not fair. I really liked this: I ...

Hey there, Mazer. Here to review this for you ;) Promise to keep it to the point, and painless as possible. (kidding) Okay, so first off, you said this was ...

This is one of those pieces that I read and have to reread until I realize there was nothing I could really think of to critique or pick at. x) ...

Hey, Spanta. ^-^ Welcome to YWS. That's cool that the site was suggested to you. I hope you also like it here. There's a lot to do. Also, that's quite ...

Rory | The attack - One AM: I was quick to react as Seth hummed his cool warning in my ear. Not seconds after a riot of at least eight ...

I think as far as the info goes it was pretty eyecatching and to the point. Enough to cause a little traffic this way. ;) Which is most important. But ...

What Snoink said. ^-^ Don't fret to much about it. People will see your work. But I'd probably be a bit more conscious of reviews and not views. But things ...

Hey there, Matt. Welcome to YWS. :) I hope you're finding the site to you're liking so far. I'm sure it won't take long for you to get into the ...

Personally, I found myself agreeing with both Ty and Shear. I wasn't quite sure what to make of my view on it my first read through. I suppose a lot ...

Hey there. Here as requested. I guess I'll just jump right into the nitpicks and such. ;) He heard a ticking (;) a ticking of a grandfather clock. The cracked ...