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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Thirty Four Year Old Child

    Hey there, Ofir. Here to lend a review for you. (: He's a thirty four year old child, or so (Using the words "or so" here through off this sentence ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Interduction

    Hey, Sarah. (: Welcome to the site. I hope you've made yourself comfortable so far. YWS is really pretty great. It seems you've had a few welcomes already! That's good. ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Post your gif HERE!

    Try photobucket, Jas. They have loads of gifs. Just copy the IMG code and paste it onto here. (:

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Post your gif HERE!

    The title is pretty self-explanatory, obviously. But for those of you who ask why: ... Because it's fun So post away my fellow giffers. Post your meaningless, funny, beautiful, creative, ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I wanted a real father

    Hey, Gracie (: Here to review for you. Yeah, I could see what you were meaning when you said it seemed a bit clunky in places. But since this poem ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Blabber On

    One of the buds on my headphones went out. x\ So I borrowed my brothers. The whole time I kept smelling his Versace cologne.

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: I hate to say this but... Vampires

    I have to say, this was very nicely written and thought out for the most part. Although, in some places I found it a little difficult to stay interested in ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: I think I'm gonna like it here!

    Hey Erin. ^-^ So glad to have you here. Like your friend bubbles, I also suggested the site to a friend. I hope you end up really enjoying it here. ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Sinews

    Wow, Ty. There's a lot I can say about this piece. And as I was reading I started to phrase in my head all of the things I liked and ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Intreasting

    Hey there, welcome to YWS. ^-^ I'm glad you stumbled upon the site. I guarantee you will really like it here once you start becoming active. There's a lot of ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Many good writers seem to get ignored

    Rosey Unicorn actually came up with an idea two summers ago that answers that question and which we'll be implementing soon: Review Teams. What happens is those who wish to ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Death Code

    Hey, DarkRain. First off I would just like to say that this was a very original and organic sounding piece. There was nothing remotely cliche about it. I appreciate that ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Archive Re: Rousseau's Academy for Vampire Hunters 2

    Seth heard someone approach. He looked up quickly to see it was Riley carrying Katie. He quickly played weary as if still under the effects of his poison. Riley placed ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Penguin

    That was probably the cutest big-headed penguin I've seen yet. Although I'm sorry I can't critique much on it. Sorry about your computer. ;) Mines working like a gem. *knocks ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Hope, and strands of life. :)

    Here to review! Hold on to your hats.. Okay, so the obvious things: There's always a rainbow on the horizon, (I'm not so sure you need this comma here.) after ...

    Apr 17, 2011


May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death.
— An Unknown Bride, Leap Year