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uhm. . . . . .7/10 :smt115 Me next!

I loved the words. Especially this: Infinite, hollow innuendos I'm tempted to steal that and put it somewhere x) But I won't. ..Anyway, the only thing that I personally could ...

This was entertaining in, probably, all of the weirdest ways. I liked it a lot. I'm sorry to say that I don't have much critique to give, because I doubt ...

Hey, John. Welcome to the site. You seem quite softly spoken there. ;) I'll do the honors of greeting you to YWS for the third time. (: Well, let's see. ...

The only part I didn't really like about the flier was this part: A Writer Looking to Improve Under 30 I think the age thing could have been described in ...

My only suggestion is that you get rid of some of the "beeps" because you seem to be going a little beep-crazy : P I agree with this completely. Mostly ...

Hey, Vyper. Welcome to the site. And I say that with the highest form of welcoming. (: You sound like a really cool writer, as well as person, as well ...

Wonder how much that would be worth if it were signed by you :P I'd pay extra.. x) Plus, it'd just looked cooler autographed.

There're a couple critiques I'd like to give, before delving into the parts I liked about this piece. ;) I guess I'll start off with those so that I can ...

Hey, Jenth. These were really original and all. But I have to say, after the first, I was less than thrilled with the others. D: Your first blew the rest ...

These are beautiful --first off. (: You obviously are very artistically inclined. No question about that. But what I loved most was the range that becomes apparent through looking at ...

Hey, Ankit. ^-^ Welcome to the site. I hope you'll find it a great place to be. You'll fit in just find here, no doubt. ;) YWS is a great ...

I liked this poem mainly for two reasons. One, your rhyme scheme flowed beautifully in my opinion. Two, the simplicity of it worked very well. This didn't exactly have to ...

This is really awesome. I like all the texture and lines and your use of shading in certain spots. The textures in the clothes are great. (There's actual folds in ...

Hello, new member. ^-^ How are you? Finding the site to your liking I hope? If you're having any trouble with the avatar business, it's really not that difficult to ...