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The ending of this was very cute I think. Actually, the ending was sort of perfect for the story. I appreciate how you made this so leveled and smooth. The ...

One word --beautiful. I really loved this. And although others may be able to find something off or fixable in this poem, I do not see a thing. Mostly because ...

I really like the idea of a poem based on fighting your own inner battles. I can relate to this because this is what the inside of my own head ...

The only thing I didn't quite like was the fact that this seemed so sudden and irrelevant to me when I first jumped into it. But as you said, it ...

Hey, Jasmyn. (: Nice to have you on the site, and Welcome to YWS! As another new addition, I would just like to say that you have nothing to worry ...

The other reviewers seemed to have caught quite a few of the mistakes I would have. So I'll simply comment on the context of the writing itself. First off, I ...

Hey there, MrsSGriffiths. Welcome to YWS. (: It's nice to see more enthusiastic new members coming in. Yes, the site is pretty great. And there are definitely a lot of ...

Maybe you were going for a style, but there was really no punctuation at all apart from the exclamation marks. It seemed imbalanced, but maybe that's just me. This obviously ...

Hey, ThornedRose. This was a pretty short poem. I noticed a lot of commas where I would probably assume periods to be. It just felt sort of weird reading this ...

The way you wrote this was very nicely balanced in my opinion. I liked how you contradicted the statements and feelings with, But they don't, But it isn't, etc. Because ...

Hey, Theo. (: These are both very beautiful. As for the first drawing, I really loved the shading on the legs. Although, the side of the left calf looks a ...

Eeeee! It's just a lil mini-pig. I had to make something awesome be my 300th post. ^-^

First off, I'd just like to commend you on how cute this was. (: I really did like it a lot. The only thing I probably would consider critiqueing would ...

Hey, King. (: Don't worry about a thing. I'd be more than happy to lend a hand. What specifically did you have any questions about? The basics can be vaguely ...

I think this might be read a little neater if you added the proper punctuation. Sorry, it's just a pet peeve of mine. x) Also, because I noticed you added ...