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Re: Its time.
Hey there, Boolovesyou. :D First off, as I normally like to start my reviews off, I just want to say that I really did like this. I think that what ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Race
Now this ... was pretty great. :mrgreen: Firstly, I just want to say that I enjoyed the way you smoothly unraveled the mind of a guy who was so conflicted ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Who Ate
D'aww. D: What a sad poem! I don't know why I tend to like reading stuff like this. I guess it's because I like to see writers show understanding for ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: My Sister Lauren (Chapter 1)
Hey, Gossipgirl! Smylin' here, ready to review what you have of this short story of yours. :mrgreen: I'll try my best to be clear and not so all over the ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Hello
Hi there. :] Welcome to YWS, W0lfbane. It's cool you joined the site! I can almost guarantee you're going to love it here, everyone else sort of seems to. ^-^ ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: The She-King
Hi! So, this seemed to be very nice and clearly written. There were no real mistake that I could think of to point out to you, so thumbs up on ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Tyler's Song
Hey there. So I have a couple things I guess that I wanted to point out with this. First of all, it was a nice short story. I think after ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Create a Tumblr for your Main Character
I've finally gotten around to this. :mrgreen: I'm stoked to follow all of these now. Here's my main character's tumblr from my novel 'The First Son' .
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
I'm new to the Photography forum on this site and I have a question. Are you not allowed to post photos of people here? The reason I'm asking is because ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 21)
Ah, finally... * makes it rain with virtual cookies* ...Now I feel I can give a proper review seeing as I'm all caught up. I have to say after reading ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 20)
I'm almost caught up! Just wanted to make a brief comment though about Aaron Carter's name. x) Every time you mentioned the name I got a mental image of this: ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The First Son - Chapter 3
New readers: If you've never read any of the earlier chapters of my novel, please do, I encourage it! In fact, that'd make me quite happy, even if you decide ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Question...
Hello there :] Well if you're meaning the title below your username that currenty says "novice", that's sort of a default title. From what I've noticed it changes as you ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Hate not hating you
Hey there, HenPen. Here to lend a review for your poem here. :mrgreen: I have to say I rather liked it, which for some reason only leads me to praise ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Hello
Hello, Alice! Welcome to YWS. I'm glad you seem to like it so far, and I'm glad your first review recieved was a great one. Just remember to return those ...
Aug 4, 2011
