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It's little me! Where's little Demeter at!? O.o

That's the cutest coal ever. :smt044

Hi there. :D So this looks pretty cool what you have so far! The overall cover art reads off very pretty and muted with all the blue hues and things, ...

Hello there, Charade. Welcome to YWS! We're stoked to have you. Yes, you did post this in the correct place. I wouldn't worry very much though about making mistakes, you're ...

Your welcome thread has amused me... ;) Alas, all you ywsers, I was the first to greet PurpleShade, so it is I who claims favorite. o_O

Hello again. :D So, I see the style of narration you're going with here. I can only assume it's going to have many different angles to it as the story ...

Hello there. :D Well, I suppose there're a few things that stuck out to me that I think I'll go on and point out. The first thing, the overall big ...

Hey, PurpleShade! Might I just say welcome back to YWS! (Rather than welcome to YWS) It's great to have you return here after being gone for who knows how long. ...

Hey Skins! xP Glad you posted this. Was wondering when you'd post another chapter, and here t'is! Anyway though, onto my shot at a review. It's really quite difficult trying ...

I see this is for the 150 words contest. From what I've gathered of what's going on, your two characters are fighting. And one disarms the other. And then, the ...

Hmm.. Well, it seems I may be at a short loss of words, as this is a pretty short poem. But I will say this, it was very nicely said. ...

S-Press-O.. Digital Bean.. Not Starbucks. xD I found these online. You'd be surprised how helpful the google search engine can be. I think if it's for a story, you should ...

This is really pretty. A lot more colorful than the other one I just reviewed, but I tend to lean more toward black and white anyway. I think it just ...

Wow. Ok so, this is really awesome. ^-^ I'm a little bit of an artist myself, and I can honestly say you have some really great line quality. You kept ...

Hey there, Shadowknight. Wow, this really is quite interesting. Mostly because I don't think I've ever seen anyone create a map of their setting in a story. It's really quite ...