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Re: All just a lie?
Ohai, Rachel. :mrgreen: Hmm.. Could you be this character in your story? It seems likely considering the name similarity and all. I have to say, I very much do favor ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Ghost Towns and Kansas City, MO
Hello, Kamas lad. :mrgreen: So I read your story, and I think I kind of get what you were trying to so here. I respect the morbidity of it. It ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Princess Aaron
Why hello there. :mrgreen: So this seems like quite the interesting little story you have going here. It's based in a more medieval century, am I right? I can only ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: September 25th Review Day
only to be overrun by the Shamrockers, who now have a very good lead. But not too late for all that to change! We're only 27% of the way to ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hi
Hello, Kehau. :mrgreen: Welcome to YWS! Well I suppose first off I'd like to say that despite the site seeming like a huge place when you first join, it really ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: A Ronson Kiss
I want to marry this poem *clears throat* Hello, Lumi. :mrgreen: So. I want to say that there is something that I can helpfully critique on, but I am not ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: What I can't see
Hey, SubjectBlue. :mrgreen: So I see this is for the fear contest. o.O Spooky. I've tried writing fear before myself, but it always seems to be a tad bit challenging ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: When I lost you
Hi there :) So, I think this story is pretty obvious in itself. I understand what's going on, and I get that cancer is the object of conflict here. I ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (2.1)
Sup, Oddkid. ;) So I think that your story is thriving in the sense that it has almost the same level of consistency compared to previous chapters. There's still that ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Screwed Me Over from the Start
Hey, Dragonlover :) So I read your poem, and it seems to be pretty simple in itself. I think you were definitely struggling a little bit when it came to ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Walk To Remember
Hey, Lava. o.O So I think I kind of see what you were doing with this, but stories like this always seem just a tad bit too short for me ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Standing up in a low down environment
Hey there, Matthew. :) So I have to say when I first started reading this I was quite happy to see it was something relating to Schindler's List and that ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: How do you post pictures?
If you don't have a photobucket, I would definitely create an account. It's probably the simplest way I can think of for posting pictures here on the site. You just ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: HI IM ME
Hello, you! Let me introduce myself, I'm Smylin'. ^-^ I've come bearing greetings! Anyhoo, so yes welcome to the site. I really hope you enjoy YWS. It's probably one of ...
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Re: Seeking Advice
Hey, Hiccup. :mrgreen: I will be honest in saying, everything will be just fine. (Believe me) I know middle school can seem completely overwhelming. Because when you're your age, it's ...
Aug 25, 2011
