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This chapter was much longer, so I feel like I have twice the nitpickiness going on. x) Hope you don't mind. I also have a lot of opinions and whatnot, ...

I'm flattered you requested me to come review this. :mrgreen: At least now I know my reviews give you some sort of decent perspective. I'll try and be good about ...

People consider American a nationality? Well, I'm an American, obviously, but my nationality is really Spanish/Mexican. And I also have a little bit of Portuguese in my blood as well ...

So, a few things just to start out in general. Ross seems to be the one taking predominate control of the whole situation in this chapter I see. Perhaps he's ...

JP, m'lad, 'tis I again to come and lend another review. x] I'll just go ahead and jump right into it with some quotes and thoughts and opinions. Though I ...

Halfway there. 8) Yeah, I'm relishing in it a little bit. This met my exact expectations, JP. You definitely kept the pace and everything is right settled where it seems ...

Hi there. :mrgreen: So I read your story, and I think that although you chose a very striking topic to write about, you may not have projected the issue as ...

10/10! That's the gif I posted on your wall once upon a time ago! :smt044

I truly thought I might've been half way through with these by now. Geez. But at least I have something to review when I come on. x) As a basic ...

Don't you worry, Snoink, the white rooms are indeed cushioned. Let's just have us a little walk there. O.o Kidding. :smt044 Congratulations you fiend, you!

Hi there. :mrgreen: I suppose I only have a few great issues with this poem. Mainly the way you have the beginning here. You seem to simply be belting out ...

Zoomie! :mrgreen: Your name is so awesome, and quirky. I like it a lot. Reminds me of the clothing store Zumies. Which I also love. x) Anyway though, welcome! You ...

I may edit this later to brush it off a bit, but for the most part, here's my profile. x] Name: Cruz Lucatero Age (18+): 19 Gender: Male Room Number: ...

Hi there. :mrgreen: So I just finished reading your story, and there were a couple things I wanted to make a point to mentioning to you. I read your spoiler ...

On to chapter 3. Here we go. :mrgreen: Again, I'll mostly start out with points that I liked most about this portion of your story. Firstly, I think it's usually ...