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Hi, Cailey. :mrgreen: First off, I want to say I'm not sure why you were apologizing in the spoiler for all the Spanish in your work. I think you had ...

Storyweaver. :mrgreen: I'm not usually one for reviewing too in depth on poetry, but I feel like this was something in fact very beautifully written, so I had to stop ...

Hi there, Tranquility. Well, I will say that this was an interesting piece. Especially much so that it was a diary entry posted, and not general fiction or something other ...

H'lo Jas. :mrgreen: Fancy meeting you here. I've come to lend a review! (No duh.) H'okay, I guess I'll begin with the obvious 'what I liked about this' , as ...

Dearest twin brother, Mikko. I have arrived to review for you. :3 To start things off, I will say I'll try to pay no mind to the fact that this ...

Well hi there. :] So I had a couple things I feel as if I should maybe bring to light here with this piece. First of all you start this ...

Hi there. :] Well, in general I guess I understand the concept of what you have here. After one date 'such and such' happens. It was very short however, and ...

In middle school my nickname was Chalupa. I can't even remember why. Maybe I just really dug Taco Bell? *shrugs*

Hey, Jamie! :mrgreen: I see you joined sometime around last month. Well, glad you decided to post in the welcome thread, this way I could lend you a proper welcome! ...

Well hi there! :mrgreen: First off, Sweethearts, I just want to say that I think that although this was very simply written and there wasn't much to the depth to ...

_[_]_ (^ < ^) == (_ * _) == (__ * __) OHMYGOD. I'm so lame. -_-

Hello, my name is Julian. I'm really not as weak as I come off... Really.

Crazy.

Why is everybody on this thread putting everything in a spoiler!? It's. . . . . . . .RANDOM. :smt044

Hello. :mrgreen: I suppose to start of, as for the cutting used to dramatize this opening of the scene, I think that how you went about it was a little ...