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Untitled There’s something romantic about chasing a breeze. Being naive I fancied a wander into the yellow forest of fickle birch wood trees. Until the wind broke violently across the ...

Hey, Blankmind! :mrgreen: Welcome to YWS. I'm glad you're finding the site to your liking so far. Then again, most new users do. xD There's really a lot to discover ...

Worst thing(s) : I have a tendency to over/under embellish at times, lose clarity and purpose to my plots, and lose interest in the things I write before I have ...

Kafka. :mrgreen: Just stopping by to lend a thought or two. Nice work as usual, but I do think there's room for a few comments here and there. Allow me ...

Hey there, Boo. :] Well, I suppose for the most part I only have a few basic critiqueful things to toss at you, so here we go! I want to ...

Is it odd that I'm nervous? I feel like I know nobody's character. Its been a bit of a wait and I've totes been laying around in a hammock somewere ...

Creativemuse! :] This was a fabulous attempt at a horror story if I do say so. All of the horror that I've ever attempted just doesn't evoke the right kind ...

D'aww, what happened to this thread? C: Here you go, Skorp. Now, do me somebody. Just don't stick a candy cane in my mouth. I reeeeeally want a Santa hat. ...

Reise! :mrgreen: Now, I see this is a first chapter of sorts; a bit rough in the sense that you've done a decent job in describing some of what your ...

Hi there, Soos! :] I had a couple things I wanted to bring up about this piece that were somewhat off-putting to the traditional style of a short story . ...

Hi, Mimimac! :] Dropping by to see if I can't help you out a bit with this piece. Firstly, things that I liked! Overall, there's something very enticing about the ...

Hi, Michael! Well, I'll say I was a bit apprehensive of where this was going when I first started reading. You set up quite the interesting scene, and perhaps that's ...

UpandOut! Hi. :mrgreen: There were a few things I wanted to stop to critique you about that, if edited, I think could most certainly benefit this piece of yours! In ...

Smylin' The lounge looked so purtyful! There were lights and ornaments and holly and tinsel and mistletoe everywhere. Jabbs didn't mess around when she got into the holiday spirit. Smylin' ...

Alas, dearest Jasminebells, the screenshot king hath already spoketh. :smt044 lol.