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Re: This is My Cup.
Hi there, Dragongirl. :mrgreen: I think what you have here is nice and in more ways than none, a respectable piece. But to be frank and not harsh, that's all ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Redmon Resort [started, always accepting]
Cruz | Pool The two girls sauntered off, leaving me in the same spot I had originally started out in heading to the pool. Although, in the time I had ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
1/10 So Lava. . . where's the pie at, huh? -_-
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (4)
Oddkid :mrgreen: So, I read this like, two days ago was it? I don't remember, but I read it, and I had intentions of returning to come and review it ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Cat Girl, Tam
Gamegirl, hi. :mrgreen: So you got a new tablet? Nice. What kind? I use to work off a Bamboo tablet when I was taking Animation. Was really smooth and clean ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Rather lie here and cry.
Hi there, Anwesha. :mrgreen: Well, I will say that the rhyming in this poem did not sit quite so well with me. Which is a shame. Rhyming poetry can tend ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Cats Say Miao
Hi there. :mrgreen: Well, this was certainly interesting. Although, I'm still not quite sure where the inspiration stems from exactly. Or what inspiration could have possibly driven this out of ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Forbidden
Jenth, hi! :mrgreen: I don't believe I've ever had the pleasure of reviewing one of your works before. I suppose I'll start here with this then. My starting impression was ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Hi Everyone!
Welcome to YWS, FallenAngel! :mrgreen: I really hope you enjoy the site. And I hope that. . . um --what Snoink just said! I think you'll find that inspiration can ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Old Beauty
Nightlyowl. :mrgreen: I come bearing a review. Seeing as this is a fairly short poem though, I'll attempt to be as thorough as I can in dissecting it. I suppose ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 3
Dearest, Jas. ;] I figured I may as well lend a friendly review, seeing as no one has yet commented on chapter three and I'm always late to show to ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Skeleton Girl
Hi there, Ancientforever. :] So I read in your spoiler that this was meant to be a story/scene type of thing. It sort of explains why I couldn't grasp the ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: YWS Newbie
Poly, hi. :mrgreen: It's nice to meet you, and welcome to YWS! I just figured I'd drop by and lend a friendly hello. I hope you're enjoying the site so ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Redmon Resort [started, always accepting]
Cruz | Pool I stepped eagerly up to the pools edge, ready to make my leap into the crisp chorine water. The smell of it wafted heavily in the air ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: October Featured Member: joshuapaul!
I so called this one. Congratulations, JP!! :smt044
Oct 1, 2011