SmileLikeUMeanIt

Hey there. I really enjoyed reading this. It's cute. My favorite lines were: If one day I'd start a family I would be truly happy If one day I'd get ...

I like it. I agree that this is very well writtten and it's nice the way it is. But I really don't like the "create envy" part. I guess you ...

I think everyone covered the grammar and spelling and stuff. But I just wanted to say that I could really feel the emotion in this poem. With the breaks and ...

Give me your honest opinion. I'm open to any and all suggestions. It's a true story though so don't be too harsh. ;) The things that reside in the closet ...

This is the kind of poetry I can never write. It's just brilliant. So many references to different things but everything still fits and makes sense. Great poem. Just awesome.

I really like this! It has a beautiful simplicity to it. It's very interesting and I don't quite understand it all but it's one of those poems that start to ...

I don't have much to say about this but I just wanted to add that I really enjoyed reading it. I've read a couple other of your writings and I ...

I love it! It reminds me of a Linkin Park song. I especially love the line, "I don’t know who I am, I’ve lost myself to the voices again". Beautiful ...

I really like this poem! I especially love the last line. It's so cute and sad at the same time. I don't want to go too deep because I hate ...

Hi! I've read some of your other reviews on Young Writers and I really trust your opinion. If you have time (seems like you've been pretty busy), could you review ...

Wow, KatTrain, I'm really jealous of you! That was wonderful. I also love the imagery. The rhythm wasn't perfect but the line "with no plot line worth the trouble of ...

I liked this poem. I understood it well. I will have to disagree with the comment above. I think it does create emotion in the reader. It did for me. ...

You made a bitter beauty truly beautiful. Amazing. I also don't know much about poetry but I loved it. I especially loved the line "a decrepit museum of how false ...

Thank you for all of your comments. I have added more to the poem. I may add more in the future as my ghost continues to follow me. I don't ...

Hauntingly beautiful. I loved it. I don't think there is a thing I would change. It flows wonderfully and the word choice -- just excellent!