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Yup. A cat's point of view. I always continue working on pieces, so I'll probably keep working on this one! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for your advice and ...

I'm glad you liked it! And oops! haha I'll be fixing that immediately. Thanks for your review!

Ahhh, thanks for the tip! I'm so used to doing that when I'm writing. Thanks for your review! :)

Thank you! And thanks for your review! :)

Can't... Hold... My... Breath... Any... Longer............. :shock: Just kidding! Lol don't worry about it! Take your time! :)

Yeah, I actually was going to remove the last line. When I was writing this I kept adding it and deleting it. I can be very indecisive. Anyway, thanks for ...

You didn't come across harsh at all! I like criticism and I think you gave me great feedback. I'm really more of a novelist. Just trying a hand at poetry! ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you! :)

Thank you! :)

Oh, you have some errors in the description as well. "Darthalia is an assassin.she eliminates everyone she is asked to kill no matter who it is. what happens when she ...

I'm glad you warned me. ;)

Yay! I'm glad you liked it. You had me holding my breath there for a little. ;)

I already know rhythm will definitely be the hardest thing for me to grasp. But I shall practice and practice, and keep practicing. Thank you for the advice and example! ...

Thank you! :)