Slowlyfaded

Hey sorry i never reply. i should do that more. Most the time i dont reply, i just look back and see what i can change, i change it then ...

Chapter 1 The real reason I’m me The night was hot, but beautiful. The dark night sky filled to capacity with stars, and the moon shinning brighter than I can ...

I never really thought about it....i dont know i just started writing a while ago and havent stoped i guess maybe cause its fun.

I'm just waiting Sitting contemplating My thoughts resting in my head. I think this may flow better if you put it like this: Im just waiting, Sitting, Contemplating, My thoughts ...

I like your poem alot and i agree with Slickjimmy the shoulders thing i think threw me off. though it was easy to follow and i like this alot, as ...

I agree with was lacking in something...which happens to be just what snoink said so why repeat it?

Umm thanks i guess...never though of it that way. But thanks

Umm what backgroundbob said..GOSH!! always writting so much, my hand would hurt...anyway back to the point. i wasnt sure i understood it. maybe thats just me but i got confused. ...

I liked this alot...sorry im not to good at this yet and i dont have much knowlage about grammer and stuff. But as far as i know they have said ...

Fear of life, I've never known. Scared of love, I've never shown. Today this will end. and I will be free, For now on my love, I'll let you love ...

She moves through the trees. Tired yet determined, she runs. As though free of the world she forgets her pain and suffering. The love she once had no longer haunts ...

She moves through the trees. Tired yet determined, she runs. As though free of the world she forgets her pain and suffering. The love she once had no longer haunts ...

In the dust, The dark of night. The lights are gone, and all thats right. The sin comes out, when the sun goes down, rumors wispered all around. My pain ...