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Hoo boy, that was very good. This is the kind of text that I try to achieve, with varying degrees of fail. Very well done thar. The nitpicky has mostly ...

Hi there jules4848! You asked for a review, so here I am! Let me thee... -Prologue: Withering Castle- Breathing softly I did my best to resist the temptation to sneeze. ...

Nightwish is good, as are their 'rivals' After Forever and Within Temptation. And mind you, I'm only 95% metal... There's 5% devoted to pretty much everything else. Mellow stuff (Like ...

Thank you for pointing those out, andimlovegalore! The edits make a huge change towards the better. Have a vegan cookie, prepared with you in mind! *Hurls cookie at*

The story continues! Unfortunately I'm one of those authors that think of a title after the story's finished, guys - So don't keep your hopes up of one just suddenly ...

Here we are again, me and the cloak ! Let's see whatcha got! 1 (pt 2) We landed somewhat more gracefully, this time into my bedroom. Tobias rapidly let go ...

Awh, nobody's requested me to review a piece before. I just couldn't refuse, so here you go. *Dons the red critique cloak once again* 1 The lightning lit the sky ...

Well done! Looks like a promising start thar. Right, a couple of thoughts! Your grammar is fine, in fact the only error I could spot was that your last sentence ...

Hi there! You strike me as a good writer, and I haven't even read any of your works yet! And you've done -so many pages- already! Smashing ideas. A fellow ...

Ok. I've read both books, and I thought they were okay. As in, not absolutely mind blowing. Why? Too many clichés. Dragonriders, dwarves in mountains, mysterious elves, a farmer boy ...

So, a bit about me... My real name's Iiro (Pronounced Ee-ro, NOT eye-row), and I'm Finnish. Just about to reach adulthood, aka 18 years... On the 16th of July. Not ...

That was nice. One of the best pieces I've read in the whole community, go you! You could've perhaps detailed that street a bit more though, since I couldn't really ...

'Aloo thar, and welcome to my uh, post. Story. Thing. Anyway! This wall of text here tries hard to be the first part of the first chapter of my novel-to-be. ...

Comments in red ! Mostly opinions - I'm just pointing out what 'feels weird' to me. Feel free to ignore my ramblings. The Oath Prologue He feels he has walked ...

Not gotten around to writing down any of the actual story yet, sorry - And yeah, I know its missing the middle bit. That's because I was just writing for ...