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Re: My yet unnamed fantasy novel continues.
Firing quickfire rounds of bad literature here... I'll stop cluttering the boards for a while now, I promise! Just posted this so the last piece made a little more sense; ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: My yet unnamed fantasy novel
Hello again YWS, Slammoth's back! :D Not that many of you peeps really know me anyway. Hooo, It's been a long while. Anyway. I'm posting an old piece of mine, ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: The Purple Sphere "2
Someone asking me to review a piece? I'm flattered. Let's see then. Chapter Two Daniel and I were at the shopping centre. Yeah, all right I know, classic loser teenager ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: The Purple Sphere
Hi there! I'll now do a magic trick! In this post, I shall give you an exact copy of your works, only mangled! :D Let's begin... Prologue The darkness chased ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Wolfskin, Bearhide
Hi there! Let's see whatcha got... Commenting in red! Now I understand this is an unfinished, under-development thing, but I'll be giving you points to give us more info on ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: The Philosophy of the Feral Hunt
They looked at me with utter disgust on their faces, their expressions contorting into masks of hatred and loathing as I was dragged across the streets, seemingly humiliated, defeated, caught. ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Loss, love, and life.
I thought this was extremely well written. The only thing I can get nitpicky about is that dividing the text a little may have made it even easier to read, ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Detached
Just thoughts I wrote a while back, while feeling very strange. What do you think? --- So suddenly I became disappointed with reality. The modern society and what we have ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Oh Society...
Hi! Gotta say, your piece left me with very mixed feelings. You use a lot of complicated words and obviously know how to produce elaborate writing, but I get the ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: The Breathers - Prologue
I can tell its a good one from the fact that it captured my attention in the first sentence. My kind? What kind, I wanna know more... Result, read on. ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
Around for centuries, this, yeah - Would think that we'd have come up with a method of raising our kids out of it by now, but nooo... Ah well. No ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Removed.
I've decided to withdraw this piece, could an admin remove it once they get to it? (I don't know how to remove it myself if the function exists somewhere)
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: Comfort Zone
Apologies if this all seems like your average session of teen angst, but it was something I felt I needed to write, for some reason. Get my thoughts down, clear ...
Jul 29, 2008 -
Re: The Storybook- Chapter Two
Ahh, the story(book) continues. Let me thee... Chapter Two Barkley was lying on her bed, sleeping. She laughed as she watched his legs twitch as if chasing something. S h ...
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: Knighting a vampire:what havoc it can cause
Hullo! I saw this story lacked in-depth reviews, so I thought I'd come to the rescue! Hmmms.... Knighting a Vampire : What havoc it can cause News spread through the ...
Jul 11, 2008
