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I really liked the imagery that you used. I could really this in my mind. I did think thought that you could use some puncuation to improve it a bit. ...

Thanks the for the advice. It was really helpful. And I will work on fixing it.

This is who we are In death’s lonely kingdom Gods no longer Our immortality cut short Does the stuffing of our hollow men Our straw men Litter the valley of ...

Again, I have to say that I like this poem. It’s just like some of the stuff that I write and brings me back to that moment when I felt ...

I like this poem! It's very scary and exciting at the same time. Reminds me of a Doctor Who episode, but that's my nerdiness coming on. I like how you ...

Just in case anyone is wondering, this is not about me and Matt. I just like the name Skylar. The day was cloudy and gray, appropriate for the mourners at ...

This is a very well written story. It made me feel like I was there with her, feeling what she was feeling. I always do like it when people retell ...

This is a pretty good story. I liked it and would like to read more of it. Here are a few things I would fix about this. I crouched in ...

At first I thought it was a poem about a broken up couple or something like that, then a assassin, then was like, "Wow, I get it now!" This is ...

I liked that poem because it sounds like of my stuff. It was pretty good. But I agree a little with the person above me. It could have been a ...

Thanks, that's pretty funny. I hope that it won't reach that point.

Thanks that makes me feel alot better. I appreciate it all. :)

I also agree that it could use more description. Your story has the potential to be and I really like the idea!! Here are a few things that I found ...

Thanks for making feel welcome and feeling better about being new. I appreciate all your help!

I am 18 years old and can speak English and conversational Portuguese that is improving. In a year or two I am hoping that I will be able to be ...