Skylar16

Wow, this is a good story! Very descriptive and well written. The only thing that I have to say is that it feels a bit rushed, but I get that ...

Okay, here are some things that I found in your story when I was reviewing it. I have put the corrections and stuff in a spoiler because it was too ...

Okay, here are some things that I found in your story when I was reviewing it. I have put the corrections and stuff in a spoiler because it was too ...

We were sitting on the bridge, our legs hanging freely over the edge while our feet were dancing on the surface of the water. There we sat until one of ...

Wow, this is a very good story. You really feel the characters and their emotions. Also it was very well written. I liked it because of that. The only things ...

I like these stories! They were very easy to read and understand. The sword and the shield story I have heard before so it was refreshing to read it again. ...

I agree with the others. This would be a good poem. I really like because I can totally relate to it. Writer’s block sucks to get when you are finally ...

Wow. I like the imagery you put in my head. It was very good. The only thing that I saw that was wrong was cryers should be spelt criers and ...

Very good. I like this poem because it shows, to me at least, that you don’t have to fake for someone else because in the end you are the only ...

I hid behind Ryan's broad shoulders, peeking only slightly to watch the teenage girl throw the basketball at the hoop. It didn't seem like she noticed we were there as ...

But there was nowhere to run. Tash reached the other side of the room and found himself faced with another locked door. Azarus had recovered and was already on top ...

Thanks for the reviews. They made me smile and know that someone likes my work. I appreciate the kind words. :D

I liked it a lot and reminded me of like T.S Eliot, or like Lord Byron or something. It was very well written. You craftily arouse my emotions To stir ...

I like this poem, it’s very good. I do have some suggestions for the work that would make it (to me at least) a little better. I would separate some ...

Great imagery that you have here. It’s very good and I very much liked this poem. Wow. I really love this; it's so powerful, and sends a clear message. Great ...