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Re: New To This.
Welcome to YWS! I hope that you'll like it here and have a really good time. I know that I do! I’m sure that your writing skills aren’t that rusty ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Konichiwa! :3
Welcome to YWS! I hope that you'll like it here and have a really good time. I know that I do! I've been obsessed with Japan since I was nine ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: At what age did you start writing?
I started to read in the first grade when my teacher gave me those little picture one word a page books and then decided that I wanted to make one ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: The Town
Hi, I'm Sky and I will be reviewing your work today. I have put my corrections into a spoiler so it's not taking up a ton of space. The wind ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: um....
Hello, Artemis. Cool name, by the way. I've always liked myself. Hope that you enjoy this site like I do cause it's a really good one and there are tons ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: For Rory
Hi, I'm Sky and I will be reviewing your work today. The painful silence of the hallway was tearing me apart. My eyes were pink and swollen and I had ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Hero of Treason, Chapter 1
Hi, I’m Sky and I am going to be reviewing your work today. Amaris crouched on a rock. Her green eyes glowed, as much a part of a panther as ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Would you rather....
Musician. He would have a greater impact on my life. Would you rather eat 30 pounds of cheese in one sitting or a bucket of peanut butter (without water)?
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: On the run
Hi, I'm Sky and I will be reviewing your work today. Janice was running through the forest, here you don’t need an and trying to catch her breath as she ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Does posting out work here ruin our chances of publication?
From what I researched, it depends on the publisher, but as a general rule, try not to post all of the novel. Try to keep it to like a couple ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Hey!
Hi, Kels. Just wanted to welcome you here to YWS. It's my goal to be a writer as well, so if you need any help or advice on something I'll ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Entarro Tassadar!
I have to admit that I have no idea what Starcraft is, but that's alright. Most of the time people don't know what I'm saying so it's fine. Welcome to ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Help, please!
Don't worry about being new. I used to be too and now I pretty much got the hang of it here. It's really easy after you figure out how to ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Aphrodite
Thanks for the review. I'll take your advice and change it.
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Aphrodite
Aphrodite my love She waits for me at the place of our first meeting But how long will she wait? If I do not appear, Ares is waiting for her ...
Jun 30, 2011
