Skylar16

Here's my story if you could review it and give me some feed back on it, please? What you think about it, what I could Improve on, puncuation if any ...

Sorry for the late review. I didn't have access to my laptop for a while. Progression Ailia As I walked up the flights of stairs in the block of flats, ...

I like the word Bizarre. I like the way that it comes out of my mouth and how it ends like I'm making fun of a pirate then stop when ...

Ailia 17th August 2556. Looking at the date, I felt misery as cold and as heavy as boulders settled in my stomach, weighed me down. Grief clawed at my windpipe ...

First off, let me say HI! and I hope that you like this site cause it's a good one! I can't say I know much about the site, but if ...

I do then I would have more reviews on my work and not feel like a lonely writer.... Q_Q

I really liked your story. It's very good and I really liked the idea of a Islamic beauty and the Beast. I would review your work, but everyone else has ...

Olá Alex! I hope that you're enjoying your time here on YWS cause it's the best EVER! Its a really good site to help you improve your writing so if ...

Welcome to the site! I hope that you like it here cause it's really a fun place to be. If you need me to review some of your work, then ...

Okay first off let me say that this is a good story so far. I really like it. So because of it, I am going to give you a review. ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! I hope that you like here cause it's really great. If you need/want friends, go ahead and hit me up cause it's no problem! ...

Hello there. Hope that you come to enjoy your time here cause this is a really cool place! If you need friends you can hit me up. I don't mind! ...

I would most definitely read this. It sounds very good and I am really into the dystopian theme right now. It sounds like a very good idea, though seems like ...

I really like the monocle dragon. It’s very bright, the colors are very vivid, and creative the way that you drew it. It’s also pretty hilarious to be honest. But ...

Hi, I’m Sky and I’m going to be reviewing your work today. I've put my corrections in a spoiler so it wouldn't be a huge page of corrections. The full ...