Skydreamer

WOW! Some of it is confusing to me, and strange, but it is amazing! The feel of it is amazing! I mean, the way that you just brought forth the ...

No problem! I understand and all your advice was excellent. I will try to update it soon, which will be as soon as I can since I'm swarmed with work. ...

CHAPTER TWO “I bet you can’t lick your nose!” Timmy Landscafe is the most annoying boy in the class, yet somehow I knew the moment I had met him that ...

‘Happy Birthday, Jenavive,’ I tell myself. I look at my glass, well, at the red swaying within it. Should I? 31 years. Thirty one years and here I am staring ...

VERY WELL WRITTEN!!! I just want to point out the mistakes in your last paragraph though, This essence of being a child made Arabella smiled. I believe it should be, ...

Wow. Very jumbled. Interesting though! It was interesting, and I think you had a great point there but there were some mistakes Even on the best of days, Ms Carol ...

Really good ending to the chapter! It sends a message! And about the preivous correction on this I seriously hope the thinks I’m just clumsy. I think you either meant ...

I have three words as well, it's a shame. It's a shame that you don't have mounds and mounds of reviews saying how good your work is! You're excellent! Fantastic!! ...

HI! I am new as well! Welcome! I hope you have lots of fun and check out as much as you can there are a lot of super friendly people ...

HEY Lucy! I do understand, I have went through that as well! I'm glad your on the site though! I am kinda new as well, so WELCOME! :D I hope ...

Hey!! I think it's amazing! The way you write is really spectacular! I love the beginning, with him not there and her mind playing the trick on her and making ...

That had so much depth to it! It's like one of those prose that you could read it a million times and still take something original from it. I have ...

HEY! You did a fantastic job on the story! I absolutely enjoyed it! A really really good start! I can see a lot of good advise was given out. The ...

I agree with both reviews! I just practically scribbled this down. It is very amateur (maybe unskilled could be rethought) to write her mother was a wanna be actress. The ...

Beth Of course I was mad. I was very mad. I was severely angered. I glanced at the stick in my hands once again. Really? I mean come on. I ...