Skydreamer

Wow! This is really good! I especially liked all the metaphor's you put. And the way your work flowed was exceptional!! You should be really proud of it. I'm sorry ...

I'm no experienced writer. But I do know, that some of my favorite works, that I have written were written on the fly. So a tip that I have, is ...

Rain is ever-changing in the way it’s the same. Every time it rains the rain comes down hard and soft. Full and thin. It’s hard not to think about the ...

When one says cry I think of the ones that I actually cried because of so...they are pretty sad.. Life is beautiful Bridge to Terabithia The boy in the Stripped ...

His smile crestened in the sun light and cause me to smile. That boy is just the most adorable little boy you've ever seen. Thirty-one today. And it's been the ...

You have no idea how much your message meant to me!!! Thank you, and what you said was true. I changed the sentence a little by adding a pause. I'll ...

Awesome! I have read part of 'the catcher and the rye' and it seems like it would be an award winning book. Welcome to YWS and to tell you the ...

GREAT ONE!!!! I think this might be my favorite chapter! :D I mean, the ways you portrayed King and Charlie. And I like how Maggie doesn't like King yet, but ...

I have to say (about your first thing about you), I had felt the exact same way, but then I started writing multiple stories at the same time, but focused ...

Thewritersdream Chapter 3 ",I love it!" I heard the three words as I drove back home with the girls, and caught a glance at my new neighbors, they seemed happy ...

Thewritersdream Chapter 3 ",I love it!" Jenavive heard the three words as she drove back home with the girls, and caught a glance at her new neighbors, they seemed happy ...

Thank you both SOO much!!! I am truly grateful for all the constructive criticism. :D And Cal, Lexis is right, Timmy is a boy in her daughters class, I think ...

Evenslily and I are co-writing this story. This is her Chapter! Chapter 2 Marriage. What is it? I mean, what actually is it? "it's a bounding life contract, that's what ...

NICE!! I am excited! :) And I totally agree the banner is amazing! :)

HEY!!! Welcome Kadimarie!! I'm so glad you joined the site!! Everyone here is super friendly and the site teaches you a lot about your writing! :D