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Re: Welcome to the Jungle
PROLOGUE May 8, 2069 Orlando, Florida Knock! Knock! Knock! I ambled over to the front door. I opened it to see a young man standing there with a notebook. “Mr. ...
Dec 1, 2008 -
Re: Red Rain Chapter 1 cont.
I saw a man with his wife and three kids run into the corner drug store next to us; the father still in his suit from work. “You think we ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Golden Guard
I really liked this story. You kept me hooked the entire way through. Besides the few grammatical issues, it was pretty good. Keep writing!
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: 1. The Beginning (Fixed up a bit)
It was great! The others have pretty much summed everything up. Keep it up. Skuz
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Death to Riches
Good! Looks really interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Red Rain Prologue
Bang! Bang! Two gun shots ricocheted off the ground next to my feet. I started to run faster. The gunman was hot on my heels. I could feel my feet ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Linneya's Home
That was pretty good. The mother sounds like a jerk. You might want to fix the part ", when the roosters decided to add one last crow for good measure ...
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: Red Rain
2011 I was 15 years old when America went to War with Russia. Since the Cold War, Russia has been recuperating. Russia grew bigger and better than what she was ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: A Vietnam Life
Thanks for the advice.
Jan 10, 2007 -
Re: A Vietnam Life
Retreat! Retreat! Gun fire, that's all there was to hear was we were running for our lives. All of us, Dog and Bravo company are retreating through a dense flooded ...
Jan 10, 2007
