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Re: Thunder (prologue & chpt. 1) foul language
I have already edited....written over...forgotten...refound...this story...its up to you guys if this has any hope. Most of you have probably read this thing over six times (I really don't know) ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Soul Sister Blues Remix, review ASAP, (English Class!)
HEY GUYS OMG!!!' I got an A+ on the paper. thankyou soooo much for helping me!!
Oct 29, 2009 -
Re: Soul Sister Blues Remix, review ASAP, (English Class!)
HEY GUYS OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! :thud: i got a 26 out of 30 on this!!!! :elephant: thankyou so much! .......... ...now you can help me with the final draft! :mrgreen: :lol: Skittles~
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: Secrett Seregreen
Hey there! this is my main character for my story...name, Secrett. Please feel free to review and or comment! ~Skittles
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: HG
Hey, once again, hoping it the lady because it in the middle...its pretty amazing. nice work on the hair and facail feature...OH MY GOD WHAT THE CRAP IS THAT!!!! *points ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Boston
Boston looks amazing...Go REDSOX!!! (kidding i'm not a fan. Are they basketball player?) Anyway. the angles of the picture you took were really cool. i really felt as if i ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: The Runaway
Please feel free to comment and review on my short story...God i love this website! Lewis Parker sat on the curb of a street. He was only six and he ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Character Art Dump, gasp!
This is great! I think that you have great use in your lines. i love how you can draw dragons, they actual look like real ones...i know that they're not ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Prydwen Hall a novel
OH..My..God! This was amazing. i was enchanted, engulfed right into the story. i couldn't find anything other than what everyone else has said. i don't want to sound like a ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: What do you think? Chapter 1 (rewrite)
I think i got most of the grammer mistakes. Please feel free to review and or comment though. I think this is going nicely for me, although i would still ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Luna. My rendition.
Okay, i'm sorry but i'm going to be bit harsh. cover your ears if you wish... her head is great. her torso is great.the picture overall is...HUGE!!!!!! try using paint ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Running With Wolves Ch. 2 (so far)
“So we should get going...” he said in attempt to ease the awkwardness of the situation. “I will give you some time alone.” He gave a quick shake with my ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: The Dream Snatcher
Okay I revised and edited so it should be okay now. You all can still critique if you like though... :mrgreen: The Dream Snatcher~ The sky is no longer a ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: drawing of my main character
Alright lets get down to brass tax...*slaps knee laughing* KIDDING! seriously though, her arms are really out of porpotions. and i'm no anime expert, but i think her body is ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: Cheetah
Wow....um...*Rubs back of neck* there's no easy way to say this but...I LOVE IT!! i could totally see this on som African vase or something. nice work! Skittles
Sep 21, 2009
