Skittles

Thanks you guys...well I must say just a couple things before i continue...The painting is big...and when i say big i mean this canvas is 2.5 ft by 3.5 feet...I ...

Okay *cracks knuckles* I'm going to give it to you straight, but I promise i won't be too tough on you...Because I am just like a Ryan...Matter of FACT. Everything ...

I've just submited my essay from my english class! :mrgreen:

Thanks you guys, I'[ll definetly fix those things...but i'll have to do it next monday :( Because my baby (my laptop) has died on me :thud: ... But we're getting ...

Kay thanks! Yeah I was just givin some advice to make hooking first sentence... Oh and i'm not done with the chapter yet..unless i should be... oh well i'll edit ...

I will first agree with Apple...nothing seemed gramaticaly wrong...and now I rate your story with five words in no apparent order...: 1. awesome 2. disctriptive 3. lovely 4. addictive and ...

Esme's right. There really isn't much to say here other than your description and detail to your main character's emotions where fantastic! I would like to see a chapter one ...

Well you managed to capture my attention...keep me realed in...there were a few times where I had to let go...then there were times where my mother couldn't peel me away ...

Please feel free to critque. I've been submiting a few things to see which one of them had the better chance. Here's one of my favorites...Hope you guys like it! ...

I painted this on took me five hours...I even got a sunburn because i did it all outside. This is done with Acrylics...Even though i've posted this, I've decided to ...

The first pic.... It's good, it's great actually. In fact To all those people who think the nose is too big...Well... what would Pinoccio think of that! hm!? My point ...

have you ever thought about becoming a comic artist...you know the ones in a news paper article. That's what the style of the work you've shown me reminds me of. ...

thank you very much!

So just out of curiousity...where do I post this "news"? Under what specific post can I find this under...? ~skittles :mrgreen:

Please help me and review my work. I want to become a better writter. I also want to know if this is a good start to my story? Thank you ...