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Re: The Night King Chapter I-partII
Thank you all! I have made the revisions as well, and thank you for the support! ~
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: The Night King Chapter I-partII
The sun beat down on the Adilyte’s black leather suits like millions of daggers, but they remained unaffected from the heat. Their king had set a goal, and in their ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Reomi: Prologue [new]
okay! I've read and I luuuuv your concept, but I would still like you to expand on this land. The names are original, I LIKE THAT! as for your spoiler, ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Night King Chapter I-partI
This is just part of chapter one, i didn't know if it was too long, and people alway complain and don't review if it's long, so i just made it ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Night King prologue(revised)
Prologue~ King Taranis plunged his sword into the Wicked’s stomach, releasing as much magic as he could through his blade. The Wicked writhed in pain, his screams ignored by the ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Confession Is Good For The Soul (Part 2)
OKAYS! I first want to apologize for not getting around to your second part of the story, even though i said i would. My only excuse is that i've been ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Confession Is Good For The Soul (Part 1)
Okay, so i came like you wanted... :D And i have picked up the usual helpful, but annoying nitpicks for you... 1.) "From the things mouth dropped..." this took me ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Tales of a Traveler
So this isn't quite done yet, so bear with me...i just want to know if it's worth continuing. Chapter I Two men walked with growing pace within the dreaded depths ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: The Road to Durelia Ch 1
you story grabbed my attention as it vividly set me in your setting. I loved your description and find myself wanting a chapter two! Please continue writing this or i ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: The Painter's Daughter
Please review, i'm hoping this is good, haven't been on the sight in a long time, been focusing on yeah... :D have fun
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Captain Jack Sparrow
You're my new best friend...just saying... :D
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: A Sort Of Drawing
Kay...so...um...this was supposed to be a flower? Now this isn't entirely a bad thing...that someone didn't know quite what the picture was about...And heres why...one...art...VERY VERY VERY!!!!subjec
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Drawings and Pictures
Yeah....i get that "there's a lot of out of focus" on my pictures...but they aren't...either that or I'm going blind...Its all just very very very there...BUT THANKS FOR REVIEWING ANYWAY! ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Drawings and Pictures
Feel free to review and critique :D OH!!!! and i would just like to point out the pictures were taken with one of those flippy cameras and the drawings were ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Ringling College Art and Designs
This is just me taking random pictures...most of them are at Ringling, but the one with my bro. fishing isn't. Hope you like them...you can critique (But I'll just nod ...
Oct 25, 2010
